Harper Lee
sets up suspense before the climax (Jem breaking his arm), in chapter
twenty-eight by craftily using effective details. The first effective detail
was choosing to have the night be Halloween night. Halloween itself creates an
aura of spookiness, which leaves everyone jumpy. So when Mr. Ewell is following
Jem and Scout they think that they are just jumpy since it is the eerie
holiday. The second effective detail was her stress on the type of weather
there was that night. “The weather was unusually warm…there was no moon.” (341)
The weather description creates an eerie foreshadow for climax later in the
chapter upcoming climax later in the chapter. Scout and Jem’s walk is also in
the pitch-black night making it hard to see one another or tell who someone is
from a distance. Their inability to see behind themselves in the dark eerie night becomes an important factor in the struggle between the
Finch children and Mr. Ewell. The kids cannot see their pursuer because of the
darkness and Mr. Ewell could not aim as well with his murder weapon with no
visible target. The next key detail in her suspenseful set-up is adding in
Cecil Jacobs. Cecil Jacobs jumps out from behind the tree in front of the
Radley’s, scaring the daylights out of Jem and Scout. The readers may not
notice at first why the appearance of Cecil is deliberate because the scaring blends back in with the Halloween spookiness theme. His scare was placed in the
chapter deliberately because when Scout and Jem later hear Mr. Ewell’s footsteps
crunching they crush it off, as they think it is just ol’ Cecil trying to scare
them again. The next effective details Harper Lee adds to the chapter have to do
with Scout's performance in the pageant.
The first part of the pageant is just Miss. Merriweather
droning on and on. Scout in her awkward large wiry ham costume settles down in a
somewhat position and waits. The speech of Miss. Merriweather is so long Scout
quickly falls asleep. When Miss. Merriweather calls Scout’s queue Scout does
not her immediately as she is dozing. “Pork…pork? Po-ork! When nothing
materialized she yelled, ‘Pork’…she caught me backstage and told me I had
ruined her pageant…” (346 and 347) Scout is so embarrassed she stays in her
bulky costume, to hide, and asks Jem to hang back and not leave with the crowd
so she will not have to have many people confront her on her performance. Scout’s actions from her
embarrassment fit in with the situation but are also effective details as they play
big roles in the result of the struggle. When Heck Tate examines Scout’s wrecked costume
afterwards and sees that it has a large knife slice in it. If Harper Lee hadn’t
added that Scout was wearing her costume she would have been killed or been
more seriously injured. If Scout hadn’t
even been embarrassed in the first place Jem and Scout would not have been a
single walking target for Mr. Ewell. The kids could have gotten a ride or been
mixed in with the herd, unreachable. Harper Lee adds multiple effective details
throughout the chapter to fully setup the climax, the dramatic scene of Jem
breaking his arm, which the reader has been waiting for the whole novel long.
Q’s: Do you feels as though
this was a satisfying climax? Why or why not?
Why do you think Mr. Ewell
targeted the kids and not Atticus?